Hyperbole Writing
For the past few weeks on Tuesdays we having been doing hyperbole writing. We had to write a paragraph on our hyperbole writing.
Tuesday, August 11, 2020
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Hi Trinity,
ReplyDeleteI like your hyperbole, I did one on my blog as well!
Maybe next time you could add different colours because it does look a bit plain.
but other than that you did a good job!
Hello Tiare,
DeleteThank you for commenting on my blog. Thank you for your positive feed back. I checked out your hyperbole writing you did a great job. Next time I will add different colors.
Kind Regards Trinity.
Kia ora Trinity,
ReplyDeleteThat is quite a interesting hyperbole recount. I just want to point out that for your last sentence where your parents say 'Trinity Shackleton why didn't you do your chores?' don't forget to add the speech marks "" so we know that someone is saying something. Also, when you said it was 4:15, is it in the morning or in the afternoon, so if you add an 'am' for morning or a 'pm' for afternoon, we will have a better understanding.
Great job
Amy
Hello Amy,
ReplyDeleteThank you for commenting on my blog. Thank you for your positive feed back. I will make sure that I add the speech marks next time and am or pm.
Kind Regards Trinity