Writing - Skydiving
Today in writing we had to write a story about how we (writing class) thought skydiving would be. But with our writing we couldn't use the words skydiving or skydive so that made it a lot harder. This story was a lot of fun to write. It was also hard because I have never been skydiving before.
Walking closer to the edge of the plane I start to get nervous. I jump out of the plane and all I can hear are my screams. At first I was so scared but I'm actually having a lot of fun. The feeling was like when I bounce really high on the trampoline. As I was getting closer to the ground I had to pull the leaver to get my parachute out. When I reach the ground I get unattached from the guy holding onto me. Running over to my friends I tell them how much fun it was. This was definitely an activity I would do again. I am really proud of myself for over coming my fear of heights.
Hello Trinity!
ReplyDeleteI really like the descriptive language you used in your writing!
Maybe next time you could add some images to make your post a little bit more exiting?
How long did this activity take to finish?
Would you ever go skydiving in the future?
Hi Trinity,
ReplyDeleteI really love this story because of
the amazing descriptive writing you have put in
you story.
Maybe next time you could ask people that
are viewing your blog to add their ideas
on what they think would happen next in
the story.
If you could would you ever go skydiving
in real life?
Overall I really enjoyed reading this!
Have a great day! bye!
-Tiare